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Lisa Dillon's avatar

Whoa!!!!!!!!

Also, section I laughed out loud at: β€œA 5,000-square-foot home that should have brought serenity was usually filled with the sound of someone, somewhere… squegee-ing. As a sick reward for all the effort, the house claimed the lives of a good thirty birds a year.” πŸ˜‚

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Bob Smiley's avatar

Thank you. ☺️

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The Word Before Me's avatar

Um, what!? The way my jaw dropped at that ending was epic. 🫒 Ok, hold on... How long will I be waiting for the next part? πŸ˜… I'm unhinged... Congrats on flooring me...Well done. πŸ‘πŸ½ Like I said unhinged...

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Bob Smiley's avatar

Thank you for reading! And liking!

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Bob Smiley's avatar

Part 2…. hopefully soon-ish? Have a movie I’m writing currently that is top priority but I DO know where this story is going so rest assured. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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Lee Azevado's avatar

You got me engrossed and then you dropped a cliff-hanger. Now you've got me wanting to know what happens next, nicely done, enjoyed that, thank you :)

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Inga Jones's avatar

This was a cute story and I thought I had a clear understanding of the genre, but the ending has me questioning things

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Bob Smiley's avatar

Good! 😬

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MaryBeth Lathrop's avatar

Thank you Bob. That was a fun, pleasant read.

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Bob Smiley's avatar

Thanks MaryBeth. πŸ‘πŸ‘β˜ΊοΈ

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