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Dan Tricarico's avatar

This was a beautiful story, Bob. Heartbreaking and moving at the same time. And the line that I think summarizes the entire theme of the story is “But this house was without wonder.” I can’t think of anything sadder. Great writing!

Bob D. Smiley's avatar

Thank you, Dan, for taking the time to notice. (And I award you an A+ in reading comprehension.)

Katherine Mansfield's avatar

I really love this story. The first line was captivating and everything that followed, magic:)

Bob D. Smiley's avatar

Thank you, Katherine!!!!

Katherine Mansfield's avatar

you’re welcome!

Mary Beth Lathrop's avatar

Good one! Just beautiful. Thank you, Bob X.

Stephanie Foster's avatar

“When he power sprayed a dead seagull out of the wheel well of an MD-11, he thought of the trick where Darryl squished a dove in his top hat”

And I thought you didn’t read lines like this anymore.

Great stuff

Rivers + Robots's avatar

You absolutely made my day. My favorite story of the week. Fun, easy to read and full of love. Well done!👏👏

Bob D. Smiley's avatar

Thank you for the kinds words.

PamWhatAm's avatar

Bob, what up marvelous uplifting story this is.

Bob D. Smiley's avatar

Thank you Pam. Always a big fan.

Grace McClure's avatar

Loved this weird and wonderful story, great characters. Funny and moving!

Margaret C Nikoleit's avatar

Great story, complete with satisfying ending!